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Tamsin Gordon's avatar

I love the pacing, there are times when I write in my journal and feel very much like this. Breath in breath out.

I'm happy I finally got around to reading this! It's been in my saved posts for a little bit!

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Bea's avatar

I’m happy you are enjoying it! 🖤 and yes! The breathing was definitely intentional! It was part of my process while I was writing it actually. This story is a part of my personal becoming and it results in a lot of deep breathing lol

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SubtleCynic's avatar

A masterpiece. Can't wait to read the others

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Bea's avatar

So glad you enjoyed it 🥰 thanks for reading!

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Joshua Kay's avatar

What a delight this is! Magical in so many ways—imagery, rhythm, dialogue. I love it!

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Bea's avatar

Thank you for reading! 🖤 I’m glad you enjoyed it 🥰

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

This is SO cute! Love the sassy dialogue!

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Bea's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! I’m glad you’re enjoying it 🥰

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

Been excited to read this and what a fun start! 🐝

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Bea's avatar

Yay! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! 🖤 thanks for reading 🥰

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R. M. Greta's avatar

Magical!!! I know how much this means to you. I'm excited for others to read it and join the journey. Great writing 👏🏽

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Apis Dea's avatar

More please 🫂

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Bea's avatar

Absolutely 🥰

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